第二天：

（I）说明原因型

模块（2）

　In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).

　The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there

comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially

when ( 6 ) .

Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind

people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like

( 8 ).

The impact of Television

　In recent years , with the development of science and

technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite

TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated

debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many

parents　are worried about the impact of so much television

on children.

　The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in

television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so

many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much

exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some

studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions

of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).

Moreover , ( the effect on children's minds are more serious than

the effect on children's bodies ) . Especially when ( the children

are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .

Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind

parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities

for supervising their children's TV viewing ).In this way ,children

will not be influented too deeply .

（I）说明原因型

模块（3）

　Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate

the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .

　It is clear that ( 　　1 　　). If you ( 　　　　2 　　　　), as a result ,

your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 　3　　　　　).

Failure will be following　with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .

　No one can deny another fact that ( 　　4　　　　　) .You donn't have to

look　very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (　　5　　　) .

It will exert a profound influence upon ( 　　6　　　).

　With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 　　7　　　　　).

注释：

1 ： XX的第一个优点

2： 支持XX的做法

3：不支持XX的做法

4：XX的第二个优点

5：举例证明优点二

6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：

The importance of self-confidence

　Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .

This does demonstrate the 　theory --- nothing is more valuable

than　self-confidence.

　It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities ).

If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power

to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome

difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary,

if you ( have no confidence in yourself,　there is little possibility that

you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following　with you。

It turns out that all your plan falls through .

　No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light

when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .

You donn't have to look　very far to find out the truth , in respect

that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and

self-confidence,　the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound

influence upon ( the achievement of one's ambitions ).

　With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have

self-confidence can have what he will).