Love in College
As a college student, campus is our home, a warm and sunny house, you can find the vigor to live and sustain for ever. But do remember there is unusual scenery you should pay great attention to, that is the love in the campus. When it comes to this theme, various words rushed into my mind, sweet, happy, love for ever, everything sounds to be wonderful.
However, our elders always exaggerate about love in college. They believe that it is a waste of time and money. It will make students to forget their studies and eventually may even destroy their lives.
As for me, although I am looking forward to having an excellent boy study and live with me, it is just a dream actually.① We are still children, do not have enough experience in love; we do not take in the spirit of true love.② For us it is just a good feeling, a slight feeling because of well-dressed or handsome appearance, not by instinct. How about the personality or her habits, we do not know, we just love because of her beauty. Love depending on this will certainly go not so further, one day, you find you two are unable to share in the same way, you will quit, leaving tears fallen down. It turns out that love in the campus is commonly short and dreamful.
I think after you become mature enough, then you can use your sharp eyes to recognize people, find who you really suit to, then, take it seriously.③
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校园爱情
作为一个大学生,校园就是我们的家,是充满温馨和阳光的大家园,在这里我们活力四射,朝气蓬勃。但是,别忘了,你也应该注意到有这样一道特殊风景正在悄悄蔓延,那就是校园爱情。每当提起这个字眼,各种美好的景象不禁使我浮想联翩,甜蜜,幸福,一生一世,所有这一切听起来都如此美妙。
相反,长辈们却总是过于夸大大学里的爱情。他们认为爱情只是在浪费时间和金钱,而且会使学生们荒废学业,最终可能会毁掉他们的一生。
我认为,只有真正走向成熟以后,你才具备足够敏锐的眼光去认识别人,最终找到真正适合自己的另一半,然后珍视你们的感情。
词汇斟酌
vigor n. 精力,活力
sustain vt. 维持,持续
scenery n. 风景,景色
exaggerate v. 夸大,夸张
instinct n. 本能,直觉,天性
personality n. 人格,个性
佳句临摹
①【注释】look forward to期待做…,盼望….
【临摹】They are looking forward to her visit.他们在期待着她的来访。
②【注释】take in理解,吸收
【临摹】We couldn’t take in the meaning of the word.我们无法理解这个词的含义。
③【注释】take sth. seriously严肃对待…,认真看待…
【临摹】You should step away from the video games,and take your study seriously.你应该远离电子游戏,认真对待学业。
思如泉涌
Love me little, love me long. 爱不贵亲密,贵长久。
Love is blind. 爱情是盲目的。