上海新东方四级写作精解:题型示例及高分范文

发布时间:2011-09-29 共2页

上海新东方四六级作文主讲教师 杨渝
  作为四六级改革浪潮冲击最小的一个部分,2006年6月17日的四级作文考题出题思路依然体现了稳定的态势。这一篇A Poster Recruiting依然沿用了原因现象类文章的出题方法,而相比以前的题目,在写作形式上给同学们提供了较大的发挥空间,作为书信格式或是普通短文形式出现皆可。下面从题型分析,范文示例及写作对策三个方面对今年的考题作一个 

简要的分析。
  一.题型分析
  从2000年以来,四六级作文逐渐让正反阐释文(一些人认为,另一些人认为,我认为)这样的文体淡出历史舞台。取而代之的是一种以说明具体的原因现象的的文章(现象引入、原因、危害、方法等用层次过渡加以提示(如:1 2 3)。这种文章是最近几年四级和六级的主打题型,本次作文的题目也在考前预料之内,用原因现象类的写作方式可以轻松应对的。
  本文提纲如下:
  1、校学生会将组织一次暑假志愿者活动,现招募志愿者 
  2、本次志愿者活动的目的,内容,安排等 
  3、报名联系方式
  提纲 比较清晰,不存在理解障碍,是比较典型的三段式写作方式,按照我们教学中讲的拆分提纲办法可以在考试中简单地把提纲稍作改动如下:
  1. 学生会有招募志愿者的活动,值得关注
  2. 本次志愿者活动的安排如下:1 目的 2 内容 3 安排
  3. 报名方式及联系方式分别给出
  各段的提纲句用自己能够支撑的语言写成主题句放在段首,然后在找出最简单的内容去支撑小的观点。每个观点一句话即可。
  二.高分范文示例:
  A Poster Recruiting
  Now people in growing numbers realize that it is important for college students to take an active part in social activities. Therefore, the student union of our university decides to organize a social practice during the summer holiday and is now recruiting volunteers from all the students.
  The details of the activity are listed as follows. First of all, the activity is designated to broaden the students’ view so as to enrich their knowledge. Next, the arrangement mainly includes looking after the senior citizens who live alone, introducing the effective ways of environmental protection to the passers-by in the street and cooperating in a survey for some companies. Last but not least, the timetable, namely schedule, will be settled down by next Monday.
  It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the information beyond books. As long as you are an undergraduate student of this university and are willing to take the responsibility to help others, welcome to contact us at 12345678 or send email to joy@hotmail.com. Please act without delay!

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