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　　英语四级作文题目： “Women in the Modern World”
　　英语四级作文提纲：
　　1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.________
　　2. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. ______
　　3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. __

　　例1． （2分段）