GMAT考试作文机经AI部分更新(九)

发布时间:2012-05-24 共1页

  12.(1次)

  原始寂静:

  V1(BY: fiona128876) In today's world, we benefit more from the energy and new ideas of younger workers than from the experience and wisdoms of the older workers.

  考古:

  V1. In today's fast-paced world, employers tend to benefit more from younger employers than older ones with experience and wisdom

  V2. employers benefit more from from young workers with energy and new ideas than older workers with experience and wisdom

  V3. 现在快节奏的社会里,公司从年轻的员工身上能够得到更多benefit,compared to 年长的员工

  V4. Employer benefits more from the energy and new ideas of younger workers than from experience and wisdom of older workers.

  V5. 对于employers而言,年轻员工的energy和intelligence比older workers的experience& wisdom更重要

  V6. 以前没见过。。。或者我孤陋寡闻了。。。Employers benefit from young people who is full of energy or from the old people who has experience?

  V7. 对于employer而言,年轻员工的energy和intelligence比olde workers的experience& wisdom更重要

  V8. 寂静上有,employers benefit more from younger workers with energy and new ideas than from older workers with experience and wisdom

  整合:

  在快速发展的当今社会,对于雇主来说,能从年轻的员工身上能比从年长的员工身上获益更多,尽管年长的员工有更多的经验和智慧,但是年轻员工拥有更旺盛的精力和更多的新颖想法

  参考思路:

  1.行业不同,需求不同。比如医生这个职业,老医生的经验比较重要,广告传媒业,年轻人的new idea比较重要

  2.即使是相同的行业,不同的职位也有不同的需求。比如领导决策时需要依靠丰富的经验总之不能一概而论

  3. physically 年轻人比较energetic, not so easily tired e.g. Google, face book founder work all night,创造型公司特别注重energy and creative advertisement etc.

  4.attitude/passion can make up for the shortage of experiences and wisdom’s benefit

  e.g. "JIT""KAIZEN" “Toyota” "Model T" experienced employee can get a higher salary 5. 年老 stick to conventions / does everything by rules

  13.(1次)

  原始寂静:

  V1(BY: suishuisui ) 因为他们占有更多的resources和能力,celebrities have the only ability to effectively solve the social problems

  考古:

  V1. celebrities have more salary and higher social statue,so they will be more representative in social problem

  V2. Becase the high-profile status and access to resources, celebrities are uniquely qualified to effectively address the social problems.

  整合:

  因为名人有很高的形象地位,容易得到社会资源(版本2:有更高的工资),因此只有他们才有资格有效的处理社会问题

  参考思路:

  1. 论uniquely qualified. many effective types to address the social problem for the common, such as Weibo, BBS, Linked-in, Dialogue.

  2. 论effectively, 名人和老百姓的生活圈是不一样的,所以他们不一定能发掘很多社会问题,并有效地阐述

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