����原译文：The Haikou Power Station Project invested by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co,Ltd. was highly appraised for its construction speed and quality.

　　����注：投资某项工程应为invest in a project，在被动语态中不能漏去前置词in。

　　应译为：The Haikou Power Station Project invested in(在某些情况下可用financed or funded) by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co., Ltd. was highly appraised for its construction speed and quality.

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　　2.上海SFECO拥有5个控股子公司。

　　������原译文：Shanghai SFECO Group has 5 share-holding companies.

　　������注：share-holding company指控制或持有某公司股权的股东公司。上述译文意思是5个公司持有Shanghai SFECO Group的股份，换句话说，这5个公司是“老子”公司，因此显然不符合中文原意。

　　������应译为：Shanghai SFECO Group is a holding company of 5 subsidiary companies. 或Shanghai SFECO Group holds shares of 5 subsidiary companies.

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　　3.中国民生银行有限公司

　　�� 原译文：China Minsheng Banking Corporation, Ltd.

　　���� 注：corporation本身即为有限公司，相当于limited company，英译中无需再加“Ltd”。

　　应译为：China Minsheng Banking Corporation

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　　4.项目中标之后，我们将立即开始前期准备工作。

　　���� 原译文：After the bid is awarded, we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.

　　���� 注：项目中标应为accept a bid or award the contract。显然上述译文把两种表达法相混淆了。

　　应译为：After the bid is accepted (or the contract is awarded), we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.

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　　5.欢迎您参观我们交易会

　　������原译文：Welcome you to visit our fair!

　　������注：译文中welcome是动词，因此此句是祈使句形式，省略的主语为第二人称你(你们)，而不是中文所含的我(我们)之意。

　　应译为：We welcome you to visit our trade fair!

　　��������更简洁而地道的译法是：Welcome to our trade fair!